Song Sung Sappy, Everybody knows one...

i dont really like my previous post. i rushed it and didn't really do it justice. But its done now so lets move on.

this is me trying to write like leonard cohen.it doesn't really work out like that but nevermind. It's not my usual style is what i suppose i am saying and i was actually trying to write a song that someone else would sing. Just stick a leonard-type guitar backing to it and then either throw up or enjoy it.

Moon Song

Remember the night we adopted the moon?
her father was me and her mother was you
And I sung her these words as you hummed her this tune
A beautiful moment that happened in June

because she beamed
because she shone
and she was whole,

because we dreamed
but not for long
we'd have it all.

i remember we followed her light to the woods
Where she left us alone and there we both stood
Then under the trees that huddled above
We both made a promise and then we made love

because she beamed
because she shone
and she was whole,

because we dreamed
but not for long
we'd have it all.